Tuesday, December 22, 2009

The Kiss

I was just reading Elana Johnson’s blog, and apparently we writers are supposed to post a kiss from novel we are working on or have worked on. So here it is from Lost in a Heartbeat. Hope you enjoy it as much as Calleigh did. At least this kiss wasn’t disastrous like the first one.

We finished our breakfast, but I still wasn’t ready to move. Aaron didn’t seem to be in a big rush to leave, either.

I scooted closer to him, our bodies touching, my heart thumping so loud I was positive he could hear it.

“About the optional condition regarding this bracelet”—I held up my wrist to show him what bracelet I was referring to—“the answer is yes.”

He knew exactly what I meant. He leaned forward, his lips close to mine, then he paused, a smile on his face. “You’re not gonna hit me if I kiss you, are you?”

I didn’t actually answer him with words. Instead, I leaned in the rest of the way and kissed him. And unlike last time, the only thoughts I had were of Aaron and the caress of his mouth against mine.

Do you have a favorite book in which the kiss scene rocks? Check out this link to Absolute Write in which kissing in YA novels was discussed. There’re some great recommendations.

7 comments:

Nisa said...

Aww.. Sweet! I want to know more about those conditions attached to the bracelet! :)

Roni @ FictionGroupie said...

Great snippet! This whole kissing blogfest was such a great idea.

ElanaJ said...

I love the dialog! Great job, Stina.

Stina Lindenblatt said...

Oops! I guess I could have preambled that a little better. They're sitting on the pier overlooking a lake. Way more romantic than the kitchen table.

Thanks everyone for comments. :D

Pamela said...

Nice kiss. =)

Karen Denise said...

You write great dialogue! And as for a kissing scene I love in YA, well, the most current one I loved was Katniss and Peeta in Catching Fire...loved it!

Suzette Saxton said...

More! More! More!

(Great scene, Stina!)