Monday, June 20, 2011

Get Corked: The Screenwriters’ Trick for Plotting

I’d like to introduce you to my new best friend.

That’s right. My new best friend is a corkboard, and it’s become my savior when it came to restructuring my WIP. I love it so much, I’m going to use it this summer to plot out my next novel.
This is how it works:
·         Each index card represents a scene.
·         On one side of the card, write a sentence or two about the scene.
·         On the bottom, indicate what emotional change(s) your POV character goes through during the scene.
·         On the back, write the GMC (Goal, Motivation, Conflict) for your POV character. If you want, you can write them for all the characters in the scene, too, though you might have to do this on additional index cards and pile them underneath the main one.
Now comes the fun part:
·         Pin the index cards in the order you think the scenes should go.
·         Play around with them, and see if there’s a better way to sequence the scenes to make your story stronger.
·         Don’t be afraid to toss away scenes that aren’t working the way you first envisioned.
Obviously, this is ideally done BEFORE you write your first draft. But even if you’ve written your first draft (or your third or fifth draft), you can still use this tool. When Laura Pauling (the queen of story structure) told me I should move a few scenes around in my WIP, I thought she was insane brilliant. But after playing around with the corkboard, I not only moved those scenes around, I moved several others and tossed a few in the recycle bin (but this is only because my story problem/goal had changed).
While moving a scene might sound daunting if you’ve already written the first draft, after plotting things out on the corkboard, it’s not so scary after all. You can see how much better the story will be, and the rewrites won’t be so painful (at least that’s what I keep telling myself).
You can’t see it in this picture, but the cards are organized according to Act, and the key element of the act (e.g Catalyst, Debate, or Dark Moment*) are indicated on the appropriate card.
Have any of you used a corkboard (or the software equivalent) for plotting out your story (either before the first draft (plotters) or afterwards (pansters)? And if so, do you have any other tips to share?
(* refers to the elements in Save the Cat by Blake Synder)
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Next week, I’m going to NYC for the RWA conference (and family vacation). Since I have a gazillion things to do before I leave, this will be my last post until July 11th. After that, I’ll be posting Mondays and Wednesdays until September 5th.

I miss you all already. :)

XOX


64 comments:

Laura Pauling said...

Thanks for the link! And I have to be honest, I have to gather up courage before I suggest to anyone to move a couple scenes around. It's not easy! I don't have a corkboard but I do write out all those cards and lay them out on my floor!

Sarah said...

This looks like such a great idea. I've never done anything like this, and honestly, probably won't because I'm allergic to organization; everytime I try a project like this, I fizzle out quickly. I am so envious of people who plot things out this deliberately, though.

B. WHITTINGTON said...

Thanks for the tips. I plan to get a corkboard. But I'll need several as I'm working on several novels at once. Might help much to keep me working and going in the right direction with each. Bless you and have a great time in NYC. I went last time RWA was there and it was a blast. Missing that experience.

Pk Hrezo said...

When I read about the corkboard on Save the Cat I had a little nerdgasm. I can't wait to try this method out with my next story.

Have an awesome amazing time in NY!! I'm going to my first regional SCBWI conference this weekend so uber excited about that! :)

salarsenッ said...

Ooh, I so use this method!! It's the only way I can keep track of my nutty brain. :)

Susan Kaye Quinn said...

Hey, you're going to plot a new novel?? Awesome. And this is a great technique - I've used Scrivener for Windows (and even just word) to do the same thing. In fact, I'm sitting down today to rewrite some scenes that I re-shuffled last week during my writer's workshop/retreat.

Enjoy your family vacation - and the conference!! :)

Christine Danek said...

I've tried post its, but this sounds good too. I should try it even thought the first draft is already written (I'm a littly pantsy).
Have a wonderful time in NYC! You'll be in my time zone. :)

Bee said...

Ooh, this is all very interesting. I've never done this before. However, considering how much of a pantser I am, I might just end up being lazy.

Nevertheless, this is an exciting way to break the monotony.

Janet Johnson said...

Wow! That looks like a lot of work! But I'm guessing it would be worth it.

Have fun in NYC at the conference! Very awesome. And missing your posts already, too!

Gina said...

Whoa, that looks daunting! Your organizational skills are enviable :)

Have a great time at the conference

Joanne said...

I really like the way this gives a visual to our plotting. It seems so much easier to then visualize the changes, the weak parts, the strengths, too.

Enjoy that conference, and the city too :)

Creepy Query Girl said...

YEs- I do this kind of thing when I outline- writing down scene 'blurbs' as I think of them and then putting them in order and rearranging and making changes as I go.

Lindsay said...

I use Scrivener to do a similar thing with my plotting. I like to keep things organic, but I plot out the major events on there ;)

Christina Lee said...

I haven't broken out the corkboard just yet (only post-its)and yes LOVE this idea!

Miss you already *sniff*

Linda Gray said...

Looks like an awesome book from here! I've tried the corkboard method, and like it pretty well. And I know you've followed Alexandra Sokoloff's blog and series on formatting your ms. Love it. A magnetic eraseable whiteboard works best for me. Can stick index cards on it w/magnets for tweaks, while flowing the Acts over the board.

mooderino said...

I do this but I use software and a virtual corkboard and index cards. Saves a lot of space (and paper).


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Patti said...

This is a great idea as I'm just getting started writing a new book. Have fun in New York.

Stephanie Faris said...

I've never done that before but I'm not much of a charter/pre-planner. I just start writing and see where it takes me. Usually about halfway through I have to sit down and figure out the rest of it -- at that point something like this might help.

Sophia Richardson said...

I pulled out my corkboard today to start an inspiration board, I'll either have to commandeer the corkboard with my jewellery on it or, gasp, buy another one when I figure out what project I'm writing next. What hardships.

Dianne K. Salerni said...

I actually did try this when I started writing the screenplay for We Hear the Dead, because it was suggested as a way to get started -- and I had never attempted to write a screenplay before. (Didn't want to do this one either, but I was talked into it -- and I'm so happy I was!)

I'm afraid this kind of organization didn't help me much. If I don't write the scene out, I don't know what comes next!

What worked for me was just writing 8 or 9 drafts until I got it right. :D

Heather said...

I love the index card method! It's very similar to the method I use. Have fun at RWA! We'll miss you too.

Lisa Gail Green said...

*sniff* I'll go into Stina withdrawal!! Noooooo... But have fun! Boy, am I bipolar or what? I like the idea of the corkboard, that feature seemed fun on Scrivner, but it feels uncomfortably "plotteresque" to me... Hmm, could you be slowly converting me? Is it an evil plot? Well, no it's much more helpful than evil, but evil sounds more exciting. :D

Kristen said...

This is a great idea--I've done it with earlier stories. Lately I just get lost in my own plot and dig my way out with a huge shovel, but thanks for helping me remember this idea!
Have a fun vacation :)

Bethany Elizabeth said...

That's a cool way of plotting/brainstorming. Maybe I'll try it someday. :D For now, I'm still a bit too pantsy. :D

Ghenet Myrthil said...

This is great! I've been using the electronic equivalent (Scrivener) to map out my plot with index cards. I love how easy it is to switch scenes around. I haven't added all of these elements (emotional change and GMC) though so I'm going to spend some time on this before revising my WIP.

Have SO much fun here in NYC! :)

Steena Holmes said...

I've done this (amazingly) with a novel I have on the go. Except, it's on a key ring and not a cork board (key ring is easier to take with me in my purse).

cleemckenzie said...

I did those 3X5's once. Left the window open and they danced all over the place--no handy cork board. And guess what? I hadn't numbered them. Lesson learned.

Colene Murphy said...

GREAT idea! I'm going to try my hand at plotting for the first time ever soon so I need some ideas on how you guys do that!

Marie Rose Dufour said...

I so wish I was a plotter! What a great organizational tool.

Susan Fields said...

Have a great time in NYC!

I do use index cards to plot, but I haven't tried putting them on a corkboard - I just lay them out all over the table and then have to pick them up after a plotting session. I'll definitely try the corkboard idea!

And I've got a reserve on Save the Cat at the library - can't wait until I can pick it up!

Shannon O'Donnell said...

Wow. That looks like far too much logical organization for me. I'm allergic to any type of organization., but I may have to give it a try. :-)

Rula Sinara said...

Great method! I love index cards, and I use them to jot down points (as with Save the Cat). I'm a mix of plotter and pantser, but I really think forcing myself to write out the GMC, turning pts etc...makes writing a synopsis easier. It can also save time on rewrites!

Meredith said...

How awesome! I may have to do this as I revise. It would make everything so much clearer!

Medeia Sharif said...

I don't have a corkboard, but I use a spreadsheet. It seems like a similar concept. I write a chapter or scene description per cell. I do this before drafting and before major revisions.

Carolina Valdez Miller said...

I do something really similar to this, except with sticky notes. I like your method better. I'll have to try it.

Have a great time at your conference!

Vicki Rocho said...

Can I hire you to do mine? ;-) I LOVE this idea and have tried it before but I have trouble keeping the cards at a high enough level.

Have a great time in NYC! I love New York!

Misha said...

I used yWriter during the rewrite, so that I could move entire scenes after they've been written. Works great. Of course, I turned out to be happy with swapping only two scenes...

:-)

Susanne Drazic said...

This is a great idea. Another one is to use the side of a tall file cabinet and magnets to display the index cards.

Suzanne Casamento said...

When I wrote screenplays I used to plot using a corkboard. Great technique. Thank you for reminding me. I think I'll try that strategy again!

Have a great trip! :)

Tracy said...

Of course, you already know this...but I'm not addicted to my cork board too. (Save the Cat, forever!!)

My scenes, and the entire MS, are so much more focused now than when I was a complete pantser. I couldn't imagine NOT doing this for the rest of my stories. As strange as it may sound, it's so much easier than pantsing!

Leslie Rose said...

I love, love, love this. I work off a loose graphic organizer, but this method is much meatier. I'm off to buy a bulletin board. Have a super vacation. I can't wait to see pictures.

Laura Marcella said...

I love using index cards to write out my scenes! I don't have a big bulletin board to do that, so I just lay them out on the floor when I play around with them. Now that I think about it, I could probably put them on my refrigerator and play around that way, too.

Have a fun vacation!!!

kathrynjankowski said...

I love hands-on aids and this looks like a great one. Thanks for sharing.

Enjoy your vacation and the RWA conference.

Cynthia Chapman Willis said...

What a great idea. It makes perfect sense. I may try it, once I find a cork board. : ) Enjoy your time in NYC!

Carol Riggs said...

Wow, that looks like a way cool and ultra-organized way of going about a plot! I'm really visual (being an artist) so I think this would work for me. ;o)

Theresa Milstein said...

The insane/brilliant part made me laugh.

Since I'm mostly a panster this would be hard for me. But I could see this being a big help during the editing phase.

Natalie Aguirre said...

I'm already planning to try this. I have 5 index cards done. About 31 more to go. Have a fun vacation/conference.

Julie Musil said...

Holy cow, Stina, I LOVE this! Instead of stacking the index cards (like I've done) you've displayed them for easy viewing. I'm totally going to do this.

Have a great vacation!

Tara said...

Wow! Just thinking about that much organization makes my head hurt, lol. That's awesome that you found something that works so well for you!

Michelle L. Brown said...

I've been looking for a better way to plan my novel, and this sounds like just the ticket! Thanks for sharing. And I agree, Laura Pauling is brilliant!

S.J.Kincaid said...

Wow, Stina. That's brilliant... And a bit daunting!

Michael Montoure said...

One suggestion -- use color! If you have a lot of characters or subplots, you can easily see how well you're balancing the time devoted to each if you use different colored index cards for each one.

Dorothy Dreyer said...

I really love this, Stina! Amazing!

Dawn Simon said...

I started this after I read SAVE THE CAT (love that book!), but I didn't REALLY give it a chance. I should try it again. I think it's a brilliant idea.

Have fun in New York! :)

Michelle Teacress said...

I do something similar with sticky notes. I like Montoure's suggestion to use color. Have fun in NY!

Lynn said...

Like everyone else here, I love this idea. I'm going to buy another cork board today!

Theresa Milstein said...

Stoping by to wish you a happy July 4th weekend!

Beth said...

I've wanted a cork board for a while, but they only one I've found is not cheap! LOL. Hopefully I'll break down and get one soon. Great tips ;)
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Beth said...

Anything that helps move my plot ahead is a great idea!

Samantha Vérant said...

A corkboard would help me keep all my weird little notes organized-- which is the way I outline. Which isn't really outlining at all. At any rate, I'm about 12k into my new WIP, and I wrote a one page synopsis for it. I can say, doing this really helps define the story.

Caryn said...

I LOVE Save the Cat! And, yes, I know he talks about the wonders of cork boards. I still haven't come around to them, though, probably because I do something similar on Scrivener. I'm glad this technique is working for you.

By the way, I love your template!

Rachael Harrie said...

Awesome idea Stina! I'm really getting into Scrivener, which I LOVE - they have a similar function and I'll be using that every time I plot from now on, I think.

Have an awesome holidays!!!

Hugs,

Rach

Regina said...

This sounds like an amazing way to plot your novel. I just am more of a panster and this might be helpful to make me more of a plotter.

Angela Ackerman said...

This is what I've been doing the last few days, too! :)

Angela @ The Bookshelf Muse

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